Tuesday, 3 June 2014

Immune

I am an orphan.  I was asleep when it happened.  When the explosion happened.  I woke up to screaming and terror.  I have no idea what happened.  The plants and trees used to be bright and colourful and the  ferris wheel used to work. The place was full of people and laughter.  Well it used to be.

Description written by Andrew.

 
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2 comments:

  1. Mrs L3 June 2014 at 04:04

    I liked the great description and the informative words.

    Antoni :)

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  2. Mrs Malaczynska8 June 2014 at 09:33

    Great description Andrew. I like the use of short sentences at the beginning, that really grabbed my attention.

    Mrs M

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